Crisis in the City - Cerberus Unbound (Complete)

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Post#11 » May 04 2008 05:03

Oh so happy to get to finish reading this. Glad to hear that things are getting back on track for you.

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Dal'yth Mont'sha
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Post#12 » May 04 2008 05:51

Glad to have you back WK. Glad to hear things are getting back on track for you and hope things stay well.

Also glad to have the end of the story too. Very well written as per usual. Hope we can hear a few more stories from you.

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Post#13 » May 06 2008 08:48

Man.. brilliant stuff. Was wondering about the EMP's myself. Nice way of using them in the end, suitable cinematic. Titan Fall! thats one large kill marking..

Look forward to your posts White Knight! PPAR for the win :D

~ Tael.

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Post#14 » May 31 2008 03:19

A battle report and a story :biggrin: ! Amazing, truly great!
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Post#15 » May 31 2008 04:40

That was truly epic. One of the best warhammer 40k reads I have had in a long time.
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Post#16 » May 31 2008 06:23

Truly excellent writing. It is smooth and easy to read with just the right attention to detail.

I look forward to seeing future literary efforts in this vein.

Nice work with point of view, by the way. Excellent job of meshing the very different perspectives on the battlefield.
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Post#17 » Jun 06 2008 10:47

A masterwork, such as this, deserves to be recognized for the great contribution that to ATT that it is. It has been stickied as a measure of its excellence!

Thank you again White Knight. :)

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Post#18 » Jun 06 2008 10:56

I totally agree, Revrandom. I'm glad to see it's already sticked. :)

White Knight, it is a great work of fiction. Every character has depth, ever battle scene action, every scene cut tension. Reading through it, I loved the character of El'tyen; I was totally like "Did he survive close combat????!"
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Vio'ra Mal'caor
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Post#19 » May 15 2017 04:23

Awsome story man!!

I tried writing a simular story, but I didn' do a good job. I am (however) a writer on fanfic.net. You can look up my work at https://www.fanfiction.net/~crazymihn

However, you do know the Tau battlesuit pilot is to all extents paralysed while in the ockpit, and that they move the suit like their own body???
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